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初二年级阅读优秀英语作文范文一：
记忆深刻的一件事
Life happens all kinds of things every day some things we may forgetbut there are some things you can not forget。
生活中每天都在发生各种各样的事情，有些事情你可能已经忘记了，有一些事情你却忘不了。
There is one thing I won’t forget forever. It is the birth of my little sister. Before she comes to the world I have imagined thousand times what she looks. In fact although I have guessed so many times I still couldn’t hit the point. I never know that a newborn child will be so tiny and wrinkle. But she just likes an angel. Seeing her I feel my heart get warm right away. I couldn’t forget the moment I saw her.
在我们生活中几乎每天都会发生很多事情。有些我们可能忘记了，有些我们可能会记得。但有一件事我永远都不会忘记。那就是我的小妹妹的出生。在她来到这个世界之前，我想象过千万次她的样子。事实上，虽然我已经猜了那么多次，我仍然没猜中。我不知道一个刚出生的孩子会是那么的小和皱巴巴的。但是她就像天使一样。看到她，我的心都马上暖起来。我无法忘记见到她的那一刻。
There is one thing I still remember now。It is the first day I went to the zoo。
有一件事我现在还记得，那就是我第一次去动物园。
When I was only five years old my mother took me there. I was pleased to see so many real animals at the same time. They seemed so lovely and active. I spent a nice day. But on my way home I began to feel sorry for them. They were taken away from their parents and friends and also far away from the nature. They must have felt lonely I thought. Every day the only thing they could do was to sit there and wait for food.
当我5岁的时候，妈妈带我到那儿。我很高兴看到这么多真实的动物在同一时间。他们似乎又活泼又可爱。我花了一个愉快的一天。但在我回家的路上，我开始觉得对不起他们。他们被带到远离自己的父母和朋友，也远离了大自然。他们一定会感到孤单，我想。每天，他们唯一可以做的事就是坐在那里，等待食物。
初二年级阅读优秀英语作文范文二：
My favorite Sports
我最喜欢的运动
My favorite Sports is basketballI think it is so cool. Basketball requires speed height and skills. I run jump switch and try to hit! All parts of my body are exercised in this sport. I feel that I’m like wind flying in the playground for my goal which makes me feel so great!
我最喜欢的体育运动就是篮球，我觉得它很酷。篮球运动需要速度，高度和技能。我跑，跳，转，并设法投中!我身体的各个部分都通过这个运动得到锻炼。我感觉我就像风在操场上为我的目标飞行，这让我觉得很好!
Basketball needs quick reaction and decision. When chance comes it may disappear in the next second. I should keep an eye watching as an eagle decide and judge quickly as a leopard and run for it as a wolf.
篮球需要快速的反应和决策。当机会来临的时候，它可能就在下一秒消失。我应该保持一个眼睛看着一只鹰，判断快如豹，并像狼一样快速移动。
Further more basketball is a sports more than just exercising It needs team work. No one can play himself. A team should work together. So I learn to cooperate with others in this game. I should understand what my teammate doing and what he needs me to do for him. On the other side I should learn to show my teammate what I need. At the same time I need to keep an eye on the whole game knowing how is the situation of our team and how is the other team. It involved more cooperation and strategy.
此外，篮球是一项运动不仅仅是锻炼，它需要团队合作。没有人可以发挥自己。一个团队一起工作。所以我学会了在这个比赛中与他人合作。我应该了解我的队友做什么他需要我为他做的。另一方面，我应该学会向我的队友表达我需要什么。同时，我需要关注整个比赛，知道我们球队的情况和另一队的情况。这需要更多的合作和战略。
I played basketball more for about 5 years now. I make many good friends throught this sports. It is proud to win honor for my team and my school. Also I enjoy all games with my friends. Basketball will be my best friends in the future and my best memory about school life.
我打篮球已经5年了。我有许多好朋友在这运动。它骄傲地赢得我的团队和我的学校的荣誉。我享受所有游戏与我的朋友。篮球是我最好的朋友在未来和我的学校生活最美好的记忆。