写英语作文时不要啰嗦，不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型，为了凑字就全用上了，给人低层次的感觉。
初一年级英语优秀作文及翻译范文一：
导盲犬
The Seeing Eye Dog
Today, I saw the inspiring news that the seeing eye dogs would be allowed to get on the train. People paid a lot of attention to this news, most people were embracing this policy, they thought that it was reasonable for the seeing eye dog to get on the train, it means giving the special care of the blind people. Few people worried about the dog would bite the passengers, or the passengers will squeeze the dog. I have seen many stories about the seeing eye dogs, they are so loyal and the stories move me.
Now the public is pleased with the news, they are willing to give their ways to the blinded and their dogs.
今天，我看到一则鼓舞人心的消息，据说导盲犬就会被允许上火车。人们很关注这个消息，大部分人很欢迎这项政策，他们觉得导盲犬上火车是合理的，这意味着给予盲人特别的关照。有少部分人担忧导盲犬会咬乘客，或者乘客会挤压到狗。我看到了很多关于导盲犬的故事，它们是如此的忠诚，这些故事也很感动我。
如今大众很高兴看到这个新闻，他们愿意给盲人和他们的狗狗让路。
初一年级英语优秀作文及翻译范文二：
Going Camping For the First Time
第一次去野营
I always want to go camping, because I think it is cool. But my parents think that I am too small to do it, so they refuse me. One day, I told my parents that my friends and I planned to go camping, the place was very close to my friend’s home. So my parents allowed me. I was so happy, we put up the tent and took out the food we prepared. When it was dark, we set the fire and we song and dance, we played the games happily. Before we slept, I laid on the tent and talked secret with my friends. This is the first time for me to go camp and I enjoy it so much.
我总是想要去野营，因为我觉得这很酷。但是我的父母觉得我还太小，不适合，因此他们拒绝了我。有一天，我告诉父母我的朋友们和我计划去野营，地点是很临近朋友的家。因此我的父母允许我去野营。我很开心，我们搭建了帐篷，拿出我们准备的食物。当天黑了，我们就生活，又唱又跳，玩游戏玩得很开心。在我们睡觉前，我躺在帐篷里，和朋友们聊秘密。这是我第一次野营，我玩得很开心。
初一年级英语优秀作文及翻译范文三：
追星的日子
The Time of Chasing Star
Everybody will have their idols in their heart. For me, I am a teenager, of course I will chase the star. Someday, when I was walking on the street, I heard a wonderful song from the store, so I remembered the singer. I searched the information and listened to all his songs. I was crazy about the singer, I even imagined meeting him someday. The most unbelievable thing was that I wrote a letter to him though I did not send out.
But as the time went by, my attention on him was less and less, at last, I chased another star. I realized paying much attention on the star was wasting the time, I needed to do my own thing.
每个人在心中都会有个偶像。对于我来说，我是个青少年，当然会追明星。有一天，当我在街上走着的时候，听到了一首从商店里发出来的好听的歌曲，因此我记住了歌手。我搜索了信息，听了他所有的歌曲。我对这个歌手很痴迷，甚至想象着有天能见到他。最不可思议的事情就是我给他写了一封信，虽然我没有寄出去。
但是随着时间的流逝，我对他不再那么关注了，我追另外一个明星去了。我意识到对过度追星会浪费时间，我需要做自己的事情。