结构很重要，英语这种语言很注重逻辑性，所以。而且评卷老师在看卷子的时候，因为有太多的卷子，太多的作文，他们往往不会细看每个句子，而是取文章的首段，末段，还有中间段落的首句来看。有时候还会更简单，具体就看首段了。首段写的好，后面就看得多，首段写得很差，后面根本不会怎么看。他们会根据对文章的第一感觉来决定文章的分数范围。
二年级英语作文范文一：
My classmate
I have a new classmate.She is Huang Jie.She is girl.She is twelve years old.She has long hair.She has big eyes and small nose.She is tall.My classmate likes reading book,playing computer games,listening to music,but sometimes she likes playing sports.
This is my classmate,What about you.
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我的同学
我有一个新同学。她是黄洁。她是女孩。她是十二岁。她有长头发。她有大眼睛和小鼻子。她很高。我的同学喜欢看书,玩电脑游戏,听音乐,但有时她喜欢体育运动。
这是我的同学,你的同学呢。
二年级英语作文范文二：
A Mouse In My House
There is a mouse in my house.
Mouse, mouse, I hate you.
Don’t run to my bed.
Don’t run to my bag.
Don’t run to my socks.|
Mouse, mouse, go away.
I don’t like you.
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我的房子里有一只老鼠
老鼠，老鼠，我讨厌你。|
别到我的床上，
别到我的书包里，
别到我的袜子里，
老鼠，老鼠，请你出去，
我不喜欢你。
二年级英语作文范文三：
My hobby
My hobby is lisetening to music.I like listening to music best.Because listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well.
I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever.
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我的爱好
我的爱好是听音乐。
我最喜欢听音乐.因为听音乐使我很放松.当我累了，我会听一些安静的音乐，这让我很快睡着.我喜欢的音乐是具有优美的歌词.优美的歌词也可以在音乐让我学习中国或不好英语。
我喜欢听音乐.我将保持这个爱好，直到永远。
二年级英语作文范文四：
My pet
I have a new pet.It is a dog.It is Ming Ming.It is one year old.It is very cute.It has short legs.It has big eyes and long ears.It‘s very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone.It likes running.Sometimes It likes playing with a ball.I like my pet very much.
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我的宠物
我有一个新的宠物。它是条狗，叫明明。它一岁大，很可爱。它有一双短腿，大大的眼睛和长长的耳朵。它很小，有一条短短的尾巴。它很喜欢吃骨头，很爱跑。有时，它喜欢玩球。我非常喜欢我的宠物。