尝试改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等，这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美。
优秀小学六年级英语作文范文一：
不要摘花
Don’t Pick the Flowers
In my school, when spring comes, there will be colorful flowers around. With those beautiful flowers, the school looks full of vitality. But the problem comes, some students will go to pick the flowers. It is the bad habit, we shouldn’t pick them, those flowers are appreciated by everyone. It is everybody’s duty to protect those flowers.
在我的学校里,当春天来临的时候,会有五彩缤纷的花朵。有了这些美丽的花朵,学校看起来充满活力。但问题来了,一些学生会去摘花。这是坏习惯,我们不应该摘这些花,那些花是供大家欣赏的。保护花朵是每个人的义务。
优秀小学六年级英语作文范文二：
买东西
Go Shopping
Today my mom is busy, she asked me to go shopping for her. She gave me a shopping list and money. I went to the supermarket, bought a roll of toilet paper, a cake, a large bottle of milk, and two pairs of socks. I put them my schoolbag, because the plastic bag is bad for environment. I was very happy to go shopping, I am glad that I can help mom.
今天妈妈很忙，她让我去帮她买东西。她给了我一个购物清单和钱。我去到超时，买了一卷卫生纸，一个蛋糕，一大瓶牛奶，还有两双袜子。我用书包装它们，因为塑料袋对环境不好。我去买东西感到非常快乐，我很高兴能帮到妈妈。
优秀小学六年级英语作文范文三：
Dear Jemmey,
I am glad to hear from you.
In my free time, I always sing some pop music with my sister and we dance,too. I like to play the piano in my house and play it every evening. Boys like to paly basketball and play football, but I don't like them. I often ride a bike in the park and swim in the swimming pool.
what about yours?
yours
参考翻译：
亲爱的jemmey，
我很高兴收到你的来信。
在我空闲的时候，我总是和我的姐姐一起唱一些流行音乐，我们也会跳舞。我喜欢在我的家里弹钢琴，每天晚上弹。男孩喜欢打篮球和踢足球，但我不喜欢他们。我经常在公园里骑自行车，在游泳池里游泳。
你呢?
你的朋友