在通常情况下，文章中动词的时态和语态错误过多，阅卷老师往往会认为考生的写作水平很差，这会影响到作文的“定档”。
小学六年级英语作文范文及翻译一：
米老鼠
Mickey Mouse
Mickey Mouse is the memory of my childhood. I like to watch cartoon so much when I was in primary school, Mickey Mouse is my favorite cartoon character. He is so cute and funny, the things he does will make me laugh happily. I will never forget his voice, even though I grow up. Mickey Mouse is like my friend and accompanies me all the time.
米老鼠是我的童年回忆。在我上小学的时候，非常喜欢看卡通片，米老鼠是我最喜欢的卡通人物。他很可爱，也很风趣，他所做的事情会让我开怀大笑。我永远不忘不了他的声音，即使我长大。米老鼠就像是我的朋友，一直陪伴着我。
小学六年级英语作文范文及翻译二：
快乐至上
Happiness Comes First
I have a lot of things that I want to do, but I always think of the money and the time, so I give up all the time. But time is short in life, once I think too much, I will lose the courage and miss my happiness. We should enjoy ourselves, do what we want to do, happiness comes first, that is the thing we want to chase.
我有很多想要去做的事实，但是我总是想到钱和时间，因此我总是放弃。但是生命的时间很短，一旦我想太多，我就会失去勇气，失去快乐。我们应该过得快乐，做自己想做的，快乐至上，这才是我们该去追求的事情。
小学六年级英语作文范文及翻译三：
成长的路
The Road to Grow Up
Everybody will learn to grow up, when they are small, they have to overcome all kinds of problems, because they are young, so they will take more time to grow up. The road to be mature is not easy, the kids should learn to be nice to other, be considerate and take care of others. Of course, it need time to be an adult, the road to grow up will be mixed with happiness and sorrow.
每个人都会学着长大，当他们还小的时候，他们不得不克服各种各样的问题，因为他们年轻，因此他们要时间来成长。变得成熟的路不容易，孩子们应该学着对人友好，为人着想和照顾别人。当然，长大成人需要时间，成长的路上有欢乐和泪水。
小学六年级英语作文范文及翻译四：
节约用水
Save Water
I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as I was about to pour away the water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled. It can be used to water the flower or to wash other things. From then on, I realize how to save water.
我过去常常在用完水后直接倒掉水。有一天，妈妈叫我帮助她洗衣服，就在我要去倒掉水的时候，妈妈阻止了我，她告诉我说大部分水可以循环利用。那么水可以用来浇花或者洗别的东西。从那时候起，我就意识到如何节约用水。