要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。
小学六年级英语优秀作文大全范文一：
我的新衣服
The spring festival is coming . My parents buy me some new clothes . Let me show them to you . They are a T-shirt , a jacket , a pair of jeans and a pair of trainers.
The T-shirt and the jeans are made of cotton . I think it is very comfortable to wear cotton clothes . The trainers are made of leather . The colour of the the T-shirt is white because I like this colour and this colour makes the T-shirt look clean . The jacket is blue and white . It's a little long and big . It looks smart . My jeans aren't tight . They are very comfortable to wear . The trainers are blue and white . They match my jacket very much .
I love my new clothes. How do you like them ?
小学六年级英语优秀作文大全范文二：
我喜欢阅读书籍
I like reading very much. When I was a small girl, I was interested in reading picture books on science and history. At the age of seven, I entered a primary school and began to read more books.
Now I am a middle school student. I have many subjects to learn. Every day I must finish a lot of homework. I am very busy. But when I have spare time I still want to read some story books. One day my young sister brought me a book Xl YOU J I.I read the book with great interest. I like Monkey King very much.
小学六年级英语优秀作文大全范文三：
一次有趣的钓鱼
My father likes fishing. He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn.
One day, he took me to fish, too. In autumn, fish have grown up. It is the best season to fish. First, we chose a good place. Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook. Afterwards, I threw the fishhook into the river. I waited for a long time. Suddenly, I saw the float sink. I was very happy. I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm. The fish played a trick on me. I was very angry. But my father said to me, “it takes time. You need to be more patient.” I tried again. A few minutes later, I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father. My father praised me, “what a good angler you are!”
小学六年级英语优秀作文大全范文四：
愉快的课间
The bell rang and the class was over. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom. I was just chatting with some of my classmates when Li Hong came to me. She smiled and said to me, "What's four minus four? Do you know?" "It's zero. That is easy." answered I. But Li Hong shook her head and said "It's wrong. It's eight." "Why? That's impossible!" "You will understand if you cut down four corners of a desk." said Li Hong. "Is that a joke?" "Oh, yes." We all laughed. During the class break, we had a good rest. We often have a pleasant break.