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四年级阅读英语作文范文一：
道歉
Apologize
I have a friend, her name is Lucy, I knew her when I was 4, she is my best friend. Sometimes we will argue for something, none of us want to say sorry, then we will not talk to each other for days. I am so afraid that we will lose our friendship, so I will always be the first one to apologize. Now we learn to understand each other.
我有一个朋友，她的名字叫露西，我在四岁的时候就认识了她，她是我最好的朋友。有时候我们会为一些小事争吵，谁也不想要道歉，然后我们几天也不说话。我很害怕我们的友谊会失去，所以我总是第一个道歉。现在我们学着去理解彼此。
四年级阅读英语作文范文二：
骄傲的孔雀
The Arrogant Peacock
Today, I go to the zoo with my family. I see many animals. I see the monkey, the panda, the giraffe and so on. I am very impressed by the peacock, it is so beautiful, especially when it opens its tail. But the thing is that the peacock won’t open its tail easily, it is so arrogant. I always wait for it to open its tail.
今天,我和我的家人去动物园。我看到许多动物。我看到了猴子,熊猫,长颈鹿等等。孔雀给我留下了非常深刻的印象,它是如此美丽,特别是当它打开它的尾巴的时候。但问题是孔雀不会轻易打开它的尾巴,它是如此傲慢。我总是等待着它开屏。
四年级阅读英语作文范文三：
我得到了表扬
I Got Praised
Today, I was so happy, because my English teacher praised me. Last week, she asked us to hand in the paper about describing the father. When she gave back the paper, she praised me in front of the class, because I wrote the paper with all my heart. She said she was moved by what I wrote. I was inspired, I wanted to learn English well.
今天，我很开心，因为我的英语老师表扬了我。上周，她叫我们交作业，是关于描述爸爸的。当她发回作业时，在全班同学面前表扬了我，因为我全心全意地去写。她说被我写的感动。我受到了鼓舞，想要把英语学好。
四年级阅读英语作文范文四：
堆雪人
Making a Snowman
As the winter has come, the weather becomes so cold and there comes the snow. I love snow so much, because I can play with my friends outside, we play many games with the snow. The most exciting thing is to make a snowman. We make different shapes every year, this year, I want to build a Mickey Mouse.
冬天来了,天气变得非常寒冷,下起了雪。我很喜欢雪,因为我可以和我的朋友在外面玩耍,我们用雪玩很多游戏。最激动人心的是堆雪人。我们每年都做不同的形状,今年,我想堆一个米老鼠。