考场作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。
小升初经典英语作文范文一：
I Miss My Father
I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.
During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city He stayed at home for only ten days. We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much!
【参考翻译】
想念爸爸
我是一个十岁的女孩，我住在离太原很远的一个小山村。和我共同生活的唯一的人是我妈妈，因为我爸爸离家已经八年了，他在城里干活。
春节期间爸爸回家了。他看起来瘦瘦的，很疲倦。他把2，000元交给妈妈，并告诉她说他要拼命地干活，多赚点钱，然后把我们接到城里去。他在家只呆了十天。 我们的日子很苦，可是我最需要的不是钱，是爸爸!我很想念他!
小升初经典英语作文范文二：
参观博物馆
During a long vacation, I usually like to go to see the exhibits in one of a great many museums. Such as the art museum, the history museum, the museum of natural history, and the museum of science and technology. Many wonderful things are cared for in museums.
There are paintings, potteries, sculptures, costumes, swords, ancient animal bones and plants, stuffed animals, antique steam locomotives, and many others. It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.
小升初经典英语作文范文三：
I love traveling. Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world. What‘s more, it refreshes me. You can go to Disneyland and experience what it‘s like to be “a child again!” You can visit one of the “seven wonders of the world,” such as the Grand Canyon and feel the magnificence of nature! You can taste the “magicial” ice water on a glacier, which can help you become more beautiful and make you live longer.
Just forget all trifles and burdens that you have in your mind. Experience is a type of living knowledge. You‘ll be sure to experience many new things when traveling. You don‘t even need a tour guide if you long for more freedom. Just don‘t forget to bring your backpack!
小升初经典英语作文范文四：
Sportsmanship
Every sportsman should have sportsmanship. When defeated, he should greet his opponent and congratulate him. If he can‘t, on one will care to be his opponent because he lacks basic decorum and the spirit of a good sportsman.
A true sportsman has a generous heart, admits to his loss and does not act with vexation. Learning to have sportsmanship is very important. It doesn‘t always matter whether one wins or not.
What‘s even more important than results is what you have learned from each competition.