英语底子太薄。主要表现为对语法知识掌握不牢及对基本词汇记忆不清。它包括定冠词和不定冠词的滥用，主谓不一致，单复数搞不清楚(例如：a people等)，时态和语态混乱及词语的各种形式掌握不牢。有的学生文章写得很长，字迹也很工整，但是读完之后只觉得思路紊乱，支离破碎，没有一个完整的句子，所以也就只能得两三分以慰劳苦。
小升初英语阅读作文范文一：
A Clever Hare
Billy hare is hungry and finds a radish. What he picks it up, Mr. Fox is behind him and wants to eat him. "I'm hungry, too. You've my dinner. I'm going to eat you," ha says.
Billy Hare is shocked, but he isn't scared. He says, "Follow me. I have better food for you."
They go to a well.
"Look down here," Billy Hare says "There is something in the water. "What's that?" Mr. Fox asks surprisingly. "It's a big and fat hen. Let's get down and fetch it." Billy Hare says and gets down with a pail.
"Can you out the hen into the pail?" Mr. Fox shouts. "No. She's too big," Billy Hare says, "Come down, please. We can take her up together. Jump into the other pail."
Mr.Fox does so. When he gets down, Billy Hare gets up. "Good-bye!" Billy Hare gets down, Billy Hare gets out of the well and says. Mr. Fox can't get out.
聪明的野兔
野兔比利很饿，他找到了一只萝卜。当他捡起萝卜的时候，狐狸先生正在他的生后，想吃了他。 "我也饿了。你是我的晚餐，我要吃了你。"狐狸说。
比利很吃惊，但是他并不害怕。他说："跟我来，我有更好的食物给你。"
他们来来一口井边。
"朝这下面看，"比利说， "水里有东西。""是什么呀?"狐狸先生好奇地问："那是一只有大又费肥的母亲。我们下去把她捉上来。"比利说着，乘一只水桶下去了。
"你能把鸡放进桶里里。"狐狸问他："不行，这只鸡太大了，"比利说，"下来吧。我们可以一起把它捉上去。快掉到另一只水桶里吧。"
狐狸照做了。当他下去的时候，比利就上来了。"再见。"比利从井里出来时说。而狐狸却出不来了。
小升初英语阅读作文范文二：
A Friend in Need Is a Friend Indeed
Jack and Ben are good friends. One day, they explore a forest together. When they go deep into the forest, suddenly they hear a sound.
"What's that? The sound is so terrible." Ben says.
"Oh! Bear! Look! A bear!" Jack says and climbs quickly on a tall tree.
Ben tries to climb on the tree. But he can't. "What can I do? Help me please! "Ben says to Jack. But Jack does nothing.
The bear is coming. Ben lies down quickly and pretends to die. The bear looks at Ben and walking around him. Ben holds his breath. The bear smells Ben and thinks he's dying, and then the bear goes away.
When Jack sees the bear going far, he slides down from the tree and wakes Ben. "What did the Bear whisper to you?" Jack asks Ben.
"Why didn't you help me? Have you not heard the sentence: A friend in need is a friend indeed?" Ben shouted.
患难见真情
杰克和本是一对好朋友。一天，他俩结伴去森林探险。当他们深入森林时，突然听到一个声音。
"那是什么?这声音真恐怖。"本说。
"啊!是熊!快看!熊!"杰克边说边迅速爬到身旁的颗大树上。
本试着爬在树上，可是他做不到。"我怎么办啊?快帮帮我?"本朝杰克喊道。可是杰克什么也没有做。
熊来了。本赶快躺在地上装死。熊看看本。绕着他走了儿圈。本赶忙屏住呼吸。熊又低下头闻了本，以为他死了，然后就走开了。
杰克看到熊走远了，他才滑下树来，叫醒本。"熊刚才跟你说什么了?"杰克好奇地文本。
"你刚才为什么不帮我?难道你没有听过患难见真情这句话吗?"本大声喊道。