英语有自己的固定短语、固定搭配、特殊句型等,如果学生能在作文中恰到好处地使用它们,那将会大大地提高作文档次 。
中考英语满分作文范文一:
中学生学习时间长、压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 "The Ways for Students to Relax"的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题,请根据他的观点和你自己的观点,用英语给你的外籍教师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。
His ideas Your ideas
1. Watching TV 1. …
2. Playing computer games 2. …
3. Hanging out with friends 3. …
注意:
1. 开头和结尾已经写好;
2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯
3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点
4. 词数:70字左右。
Mr. Griffin,
Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two. __________________________________________________________
Terry
参考作文:
Mr. Griffin,
Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.
However, I'm not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends.
Terry
中考英语满分作文范文二:
Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间,他对学校提倡的"创建和谐校园"活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动,兴 趣广泛,友爱互助,师生之间关系融洽,人与环境和谐相处(如:保持环境卫生,爱护花草树木,不随地乱扔废弃物等)。(15 分)
①请你以Tom 的名义,给远在美国的父母写一封信,介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。
②文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出,不记入总词数。
③以下词汇仅供参考:build up建立,创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom
参考作文:
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom